Urology Assistant Liz is Back

intact

Liz is once again prepping her tray of instruments for our hapless phimosis sufferer. This time, however, she has the doctor's oversight. How will she convince both of them he needs a circumcision as bad as she needs to circumcise him?

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intact

Can I have some comments at Literotica, please?

phenemol

Hey there voted and commented. Keep them coming, its a great story!

intact

phenemol wrote
Hey there voted and commented. Keep them coming, its a great story!

Thank you, thank you!

Ideas are welcome for Part 4....

Mathman

I like your writing. You have a different angle from other writers.

intact

Mathman wrote
I like your writing. You have a different angle from other writers.

Thank you. What angle are you noticing?

northcock

Done and done. It's a good story - thanks for writing it. I left an anon. comment asking for a side bar detailing the poor kid in the waiting room who loses his foreskin. Was he convinced by Liz, or did she talk his mother into bring him back to the clinic?
That might have been the most erotic part of the story for me - an off-camera routine circumcision while our hero contemplates his foreskin next door.

As far as the next chapter, I've liked the gradual introduction of characters. I wonder about our hero talking his foreskin over with a friend who he finds out - surprise - is circumcised when they go to the gym together?

alexkrychek

I too would like to hear more about Liz' other patient.

I am a fan of your stories, Intact, but would really enjoy one where Liz wins and gets to circumcise, or assist in the procedure, on one of her patients with a description of it.

Is there a reason you never include that part in your stories?

tubwheat

north-cock wrote
Done and done. It's a good story - thanks for writing it. I left an anon. comment asking for a side bar detailing the poor kid in the waiting room who loses his foreskin. Was he convinced by Liz, or did she talk his mother into bring him back to the clinic?

That would be nice, but it would have to posted somewhere other than Literotica (they don't allow <18 year old characters)

phenemol

I'm not into it going the circ route. There are plenty of circ fetish stories. Stay strong main character!

Squirrel

tubwheat wrote
north-cock wrote
Done and done. It's a good story - thanks for writing it. I left an anon. comment asking for a side bar detailing the poor kid in the waiting room who loses his foreskin. Was he convinced by Liz, or did she talk his mother into bring him back to the clinic?

That would be nice, but it would have to posted somewhere other than Literotica (they don't allow <18 year old characters)

I'm sure that Intact wasn't considering doing this but, just so we're all clear, no under 18 yo old content is to be posted or linked to on this site, even fictional stories. Mentions in passing of minors as incidental characters (as in the above story) is ok.

alexkrychek

phenemol wrote
I'm not into it going the circ route. There are plenty of circ fetish stories. Stay strong main character!

Maybe you could recommend some then? I havent been able to find much

northcock

Squirrel wrote
tubwheat wrote
north-cock wrote
Done and done. It's a good story - thanks for writing it. I left an anon. comment asking for a side bar detailing the poor kid in the waiting room who loses his foreskin. Was he convinced by Liz, or did she talk his mother into bring him back to the clinic?

That would be nice, but it would have to posted somewhere other than Literotica (they don't allow <18 year old characters)

I'm sure that Intact wasn't considering doing this but, just so we're all clear, no under 18 yo old content is to be posted or linked to on this site, even fictional stories. Mentions in passing of minors as incidental characters (as in the above story) is ok.

I was imagining a conversation in the waiting room at the next visit; nothing graphic!

And I agree, I hope our hero keeps his skin. That tension/temptation is the core of the story

intact

alexkrychek wrote
I too would like to hear more about Liz' other patient.

I am a fan of your stories, Intact, but would really enjoy one where Liz wins and gets to circumcise, or assist in the procedure, on one of her patients with a description of it.

Is there a reason you never include that part in your stories?

Thank you.

As north-cock pointed out, once the foreskin is severed, the tension is gone. Kind of like when Niles and Daphne hooked up.

I don't know what to do with a protagonist after that happens. But if it were to happen to another character....