I looked at what I bought. I'm about 70 percent happy with it.
Plusses: Cute girl, quality script and vocabulary, high production value.
Minuses: Frozen smile, unnatural pace, obviously reading from a script. The pigtails feel like a disconnect, as they're usually worn to look underage, and that's not part of the theme.
I mentioned this elsewhere, but I think it bears repeating in case girls like her ever read these critiques: I think she would do so much better if she interacted with a man off-camera. It's hard for even a really good actress to run a dialogue without a second person to play off of. It's like managing two characters at once.
And yeah, I know, who among us wouldn't want that job. But really, the product would be so worth the effort.